About me- to my website
Good morning!
I am Wiktoria I'm 20 years old and I born in Poland. I am a current student at De Monford University in Leicester in the Media Foundation course. I chose this way in my life because always I enjoy new experiences and challenges which studying abroad for sure is. In my future, I want to work in an industry in which I will feel satisfaction. The first what I want to check in my adult life is media.
I tried to answer the question
- who am I?
-how did I get to be who am I?
- what am I doing now?
- what is my future?
the last draft
My name is Wiktoria, I am 20 years old and I was born in Poland. I am currently a student at De Montford University in Leicester on a Media Foundation course. I chose this direction because I like to develop my creativity, which is certainly allowed in this industry. I am thinking of becoming a journalist in the future. I would like to share my first written work in my portfolio.
I'm starting the adventure!
Please proofread your work as you have misspelt 'De Montfort University'. I have read your Bio but do not understand what sort of work you create or why I should be looking at your portfolio. This is your digital portfolio where you should promote yourself and your work. This needs to be developed further, and you need to be more specific about your work, your skill set and what you are interested in doing in the media industry.
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