My first draft
I will start working on my film review. Here is the first work of writing:
Cast Away it is there is an adventure drama constructed in 2000 and directed by Robert Zemeckis. The film is appreciated all over the world cult in some circles as well as the other films where appeals the well-known and award-winning actor Tom Hanks known primarily for his great acting in the movie, forest Gump’’ where he also played the crucial role. It is the story of a workaholic man named Chuck who, as a consequence of a tragic plane crash taking place somewhere in the Pacific, becomes the only survivor who ends up on a desert Island and faces his own fear and loneliness. Once an employee of the largest courier companies in the world, completely devoted to his duties, under the influence of tragedy, is forced to adapt to completely new unfavourable conditions. In the film, his transoframtion is presented under the influence of the passage of time and loneliness that permeates him. Observing his stay on the Island is undoubtedly a thrilling experience despite the limited dialogue and the action on the film taking place in a limited space. We get on the plate the path of survival in the so far unknown conditions of an ordinary man, in whose place, under the influence of unfortunate events, each of us could be. In the film the need for contact with another person have shown in a great way which added authenticity to the main character. The scene in which the main character, trying to generate a flame and unfortunately injures his hand, to finally throw out the ball, found in one of the packages fished out of the water for which he was responsible in the courier's earlier life, a long way ahead of him, becomes the beginning of the creation of a "friend" 'main character. When the survivor calmed down and wandered for the thrown Ball, he noticed that the trace of blood from his hand formed a stain on it resembling a human face. He quickly painted his nose, mouth and eyes in its place, placing the ball on the tree trunk and still her name Wilson. The ball became the confidant of his plans and thoughts. This film performance depicting the tragedies of a lonely man and his ways of dealing with them can shock and deeply stuck in the memory. the film presents many scenes that evoke difficult emotions, for instance: one of them was the removal of a painful tooth which he complained about before crashing. I will not reveal the details, but it is for sure a moment that everyone remembers after watching the screening.
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It is just the draft and needs much improvement but I think that is an alright start to the development. I included some points from my research as description of the crucial scene for me and quite interesting description of the film


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